16.11.18
How to prepare "Pears with wine"
Victoria Romero (19M)
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Check the pronunciation of the following words: pears, ripen, ingredients, such aS.
Be careful with these grammar mistakes: "I have invented some days ago" should be "I INVENTED some years? ago"; "those ingredients" should be "THESE ingredients"; "If you have..., you'd be able to" should be "If you have..., you WILL be able to..."; "fill THE pears"; "a dessert spoon OF sugar".
I'm afraid I don't understand what you want to say with "appears in this way".
Instead of "describe you a recipe" I would say "show you how to prepare a recipe"; Instead of "fill them with sweet wine" I'd say "pour some sweet wine over them".
Thank you!
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